An endless night. Kept awake by screams Inside the head And hunger In their bellies. Endless streams of tears, Like torrential rain, Creating a haze around the eyes. A country, Now no longer theirs. Uprooted from their land Forced into a life of vagabonds! A dream shattered. Struggles threaten to break resolve. Ends never seeming to meet. Happiness feels like on perpetual retreat. Colours never come calling. Shades of grey always looming. No rainbows decorate their piece of sky. There's endless sorrow Till it's their day to die.
Copyright @ Goutam Dutta
βThere is no rainbowβ, you have described the refugee issue clearly. Naming different feelings and circumstances. The poem is different from other rainbow poems which make is unique and special. Thank you.ππ
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Thank you Lokesh. Happy to know that you liked it. π
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It seems to be a sad poetry day, today.
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There is a saying that most poems are born out of saddest thoughts. π
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That’s an amazing composition Goutam. Loved the lines. ππππ
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Thank you so much Dada. Your words of praise make me feel so happy and honoured. ππ
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Powerful! A deeply felt reflection on being estranged in a strange land. Very well penned Goutam.π
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Thank you so much Suzette. So happy to know that you believe the poem has the potential to make an impact. ππ
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I do indeedπππ
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Powerful poem, Goutam! An excellent reflection of man without a country!
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Thank you so much. So glad that you consider it to be a powerful poem. Thank you. ππ
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You’re welcome, Goutam!
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Wow, I could feel the angst deep in my heart. So well penned.
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Thank you so much. π
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You’re so welcome π
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So sad but well written.
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Unfortunately there are too many places in the world where your verse can fit…
We can only hope that more will see such plights and share the light that can bring color.
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Very true. The world is in serious need of compassion. Thank you so much. ππ
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Superb poignant lines
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