This society; Claustrophobic, Squeezes, Imposes, Restrains, A rat race to run, Wealth, fame entices, Living for the moment, Tomorrow's not anyone's headache. Tensed existence; Laboured breath, Pain and distress, Anxiety, stress, No time to waste, Ladder of success, Expectations wait On bated breath. Years of existence; Sans emotion, Mechanical motion, A coiled spring Reacting to situation. Nature unveils its beauty. No time to stop and gaze, More important things at stake. Life! On the death bed. Counting of breaths, Inhale...exhale...
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Very wise look at life Goutam. We start our lives being intensely involved in living and end it by counting our breaths. Beautiful. Thanks for joining in
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Thank you Sadje…Glad that you like it. Thank you for your lovely prompt. ๐
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Youโre most welcome
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A sober meditation. Well penned Goutam. Cherish every moment.
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Thank you so much Dear Suzette.
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My pleasure, Goutam.
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This is such a lovely read. Sharing. Xoxox
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Apologies for the delay in replying. Thank you so much. Am so glad that you liked it. Please go ahead. ๐๐
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Your words ring true, Goutam. Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much Eugenia. ๐ ๐
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My pleasure, Goutam!
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Awesome, Goutam. No time to pause until…
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Thank you so much Chris. ๐
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