My thoughts finally relent! White, the colour of truce they offer, Arms outstretched, Beckoning for acceptance! No longer they will rebel; They seem to convey. No longer will they stray. Chained they would remain, To the mundane drudgery of everyday. A rebel’s thoughts will henceforth, Not sully or smear A canvas, No outpouring of emotions; Choosing to remain In oblivion.
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A thought provoking poem Goutam. Thanks a lot for joining in
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Hi Sadje….The pleasure is mine. Glad that you enjoyed my take. The picture is indeed wonderful and took my thoughts into a tangential direction. Thanks to you for yet another thought-provoking prompt. 🙂
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It’s a pleasure Goutam
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Your blog is awesome!
Love this poem.
Isn’t it wonderful how different everyone’s perspective is when they view this beautiful picture.
Thank you for sharing your thought provoking poem.
Best wishes, Goutam.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Am so happy to know that you like my take. Yes, we all have different perspectives and view the same thing differently. 😊🙏
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Beautiful lines some thoughts are emotional some are real but all take us in different directions. Well shared thanks.
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So glad to know that you liked my take. Thank you so much. 🙂
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It’s my pleasure 😊 stay happy 😘
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Thank you so much. Wishing happiness to you as well. 🙂
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🥰🥰
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Goutam, I love your take but do hope and pray your thoughts never remain in oblivion, however rebellious they might be.
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Thank you so much Punam for your kind words and your concern….I hope so too. There are moments of despair though, when the mind wants to say, “it’s enough, there’s nothing more left to express.” 🙂
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And I do hope that moment passes and you can pen your thoughts again.
Always a pleasure, Goutam. 🤗
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Lovely poem Goutam. Fitting thoughts for a nice prompt.
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Thank you so much Usha.
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My pleasure.
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