An evening on a beach

33 thoughts on “An evening on a beach”

    1. 🙂 Is that true? Am so happy that you enjoyed reading it so much. Had written it a few years back when we were on a holiday to a beach on the eastern coast of India. As we sat on the beach in the evening, the breeze rose all of a sudden. That was when i composed this. Thanks so much. 🙂

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    1. WOW! Coming from an esteemed poet like you, makes me feel honoured. Thank you so much. I am more of a dreamer, of the utopian kind perhaps, who loves to sketch his feelings with words. Thanks once again. 😊

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      1. I am honoured and grateful that you read my work, Goutam. I see that too are passionate about poetry. We dream, that is why we write. That hope is utopian, such beauty in your thoughts. You are a kindred spirit. Thank you. Be well dear Poet.

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  1. Stunning. You bring the wind to life and it truly is as boisterous as you say it is. I love how you use that peculiar rhyme to create that rise and then the sudden movement of it in the end just sums it up beautifully. Quite a poet you are!

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