Always on the road his son was. The road; Which lay outside the village Like a thick black serpent. A serpent that everyday devoured some young man from the village And spat him out In the cauldron of the nearby town. Today, the old man is happy. His son is back home, Here to stay for a few days. After many years, Not in a hurry to jump into his truck And head back to the town With the advent of dawn. Today the child too is happy. He wants to sit at his father’s feet And talk, Just like those days of old When he, a toddler, lay with him at night And listened to tales of kings, queens, princes and princesses, Of Sindabad the sailor, Aladdin and his magic lamp And of the heroes of their clan. Today, they sat down once again. The stars which had in the past Always given them company, Above the terrace of their house Had been blocked. The village had hastily grown; The town had come riding the snaky road And taken residence in the open spaces That the village had offered. Their little house no longer stood alone. It had metamorphosed Into a glitzy bazaar. Under the bright neon lights, With the lingering smells of the bazaar Hanging around them, Their conversation Ebbed and flowed, While the night outside, Moved on the road, on tip-toe.

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Your poem feels just right for the image. A father and son reunion. Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Thank you Sadje. The pic brought back a few memories for me too. 😊
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You’re welcome 😉
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A heartwarming poem Goutam!
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Hi Radhika…Thanks so much. 😊
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Wonderful, Goutan! I really like the imagery of the road as a serpent, swallowing the young men up…
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Hello Chris…So glad to know that you enjoyed it. This is a typical situation in growing countries. A national highway crossing a village and linking it to a town or city leads to sudden opening up of the economy of the hitherto remote village. The young flock to the town in hope of employment and better lifestyle and the elderly are left back.
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Indeed. The bright lights of the big city call, but the streets are rarely paved with gold.
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Very true! 😊
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So heart-warming! 💙 Very well written, sir.
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Thanks so much. So happy to know that you liked it. 😊🙏
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A beautiful and imaginative piece. Just perfect for the photo provided.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comments. 😊🙏
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What a heartfelt piece and excellent take on the prompt!
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Thanks so much Eugenia….your comments always inspire me. 😊🙏
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You’re welcome, Goutam.
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I love how the entire poem rested on the foundation of this line, “The road; Which lay outside the village Like a thick black serpent.” The imagery describes so many rural roads. Your poetry shows the great amount of rumination that has gone into writing it. Each phrase blends delectable flavors into a brilliant masterpiece. Well done!
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Thank you so much. I have spent a part of my youth working in a remote mining village in India. The place was very remote with one single road outside our mining camp connecting the place to the nearby town, which was 50 Kms away. That image has stayed with me. This, i guess, is true for many remote villages and places in many parts of the world. 🙂
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Even in our city of Woodlake has roads like that, one that is windy, which was a logging road, and quite dangerous in its day when logging trucks barreled down the mountainside terrorizing bikers and cars.
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Reblogged this on Marsha Ingrao – Always Write and commented:
One day I would like to get to the point in my writing where I can clothe everyday places and events in beauty and elegance. Goutam accomplishes that in this poem I wanted to share with you.
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WOW! I am honoured! Thank you so much for this. 🙂
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I love the depth behind your words. I don’t think I could ruminate enough to retrieve that kind of thinking, but I’m going to keep trying. That is why I can’t write good description in my fiction works. I miss things that others see and gloss over what is right next to me. It’s amazing to me that you could so beautifully describe a road from your childhood. Now that’s ruminating.
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I am so happy that you enjoyed the poem so much. Thank you so much for your words, which has certainly boosted me no end. Your poem too has a charm of its own; quite liked the ones I have read. 😊
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A beautiful tale,.👌🏾 Beautifully written
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Am so happy that you liked this. Thank you so much. 🙂
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